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Fic: Together Forever 
7th-Dec-2008 06:05 pm
Title: Together Forever
Pairing: Jin/Yamapi
Rating: R
Warnings: DarkFic
Words: 1,200 ish I have no word to count it right now :S
Summary: Jin loves Yamapi more than anything and will never let him go
Comments: Written for the Pin anonymeme to the prompt of this pic of Jin

Yamapi bitches, a lot. It is his main pasttime at home it seems, running his mouth off about how hard his work is and how he doesn't have a minut to himself to even think let alone do anything fun. While Jin stands and listens like a dutiful Jin (because there really is no other way to describe the Pi/Jin dynamic without a large handful of nouns that barely touch on the connection they share) and thinks that if time is so precious to Pi then maybe he shouldn't waste so much of it bitching and just fuck him already.

But he endures it, it's what Pi wants and Jin loves him, eternally and unconditionally and would never let him go over something so trivial, would never let him go over anything.

So he waits, and bides his time, adopting his best and most effective seductive face as Pi rambles on, oblivious for now, while Jin makes a game of it, playful for now as he tests his own allure against the strength of Pi's absorbtion in his own annoyance until Jin's gaze is ignorable no longer and the words spilling from Yamapis lips falter and die half voiced. His eyes are following the progress of Jins tongue, moistening his own lips, casually almsot, but pair it with the lowered eyelids and the look of bliss that blooms on the older mans face as his tongue completes the journey like his lips are made of the finest confectionary and he has never tastest anything so sweet and there's not one iota of innocence about it.

Those lips, previously flapping in continuous complaint are hanging open now, slack and forgotten , as all the other mans senses focused on keeping his eyes firmly on the prize his body moving of its own accord to zero in on that one focal point before Jin is tired of waiting any longer and thrusts his tongue forward and into the waiting space, which welcomes what he gives without a second thought.

Jin loves Pi when he's like this, so overtaken with anticipation and want that he becomes more submissive than even he will ever realise, just enough will of his own to be interesting but relative putty in Jin's hands and a total slave to his tongue. So it is nothing to have him stripped, waiting, legs spread wide in invitation, begging Jin to come and fuck him, kiss him, touch him, anything more than just look.

Pi is spilling out endless noises, desperate and needy and lacking in anything resembling his everyday pride as Jin is careful to touch him only were the solitary finger is preparing him, teasing him with such a small yet powerfully intimate touch before adding another and upping the tempo to boot, more than a little impatient himself now to be fully inside the younger man already.

And when he does sink home, it is heaven.

The noises that were once desperate morph into shouts of agreement as Jin increases his efforts, not choosing to prolong their encounter today. Moans of 'more' and 'harder and 'yessssssssssssss, like that' verbalising their sex like a common whore with crude appreciations of how perfectly Jin is fucking him, how deep, how hard, how amazing it feels.

And Jin is so close, can taste his impending orgasm on the tip of his tongue but it's being repelled, the shrill tones of Pi's voice grating against the delicate nerves of his inner ear, just one last straw to hearing that voice today and it's too much. He grits his teeth to drown out the irritant but it just wasn't working, that one thing preventing this moment from being the perfection it ought to be and before he could stop himself he was yelling,


Pounding into the body beneath him with renewed vigour as his anger fueled his pistoning hips, bearing his entire weight downwards as though he could smother out the annoying noise by blocking their source from the air.
He was too close, too desperate to care about hurt feelings, merely sated that the noise had been stifled and he could reach his peak in peace. Which is forceful, overwhelming and he finds himself forcing his fingers into Pi's sternum pushing against the resistance untill he breaks the skin with the blunt force, trickles of warm blood spilling over his fingers as he empties himself inside the other man, trickling down to warm his own torso, and stain his chest in streaks of red.

Something must have gotten through that thick head, however, because Pi is quieter from then on, not bothering to move to clean his body of dried trails of blood, letting Jin go about his business and not uttering a single complaint, merely watching, a fixed stare following the older man's every move about the apartment.

He is rigid at first, tensed as if he's struggling with his own shift in personality and Jin doesn't like it, can feel the tension beneath his partners skin with every touch, every grope and as much as he loves a firm arse this isn't what he wants.

So he coaxes it out of him, being gentle and loving and attentive waiting on his unhappy roommate as though it was his pleasure to do so, until he feels the tension leave, gradually at first, subtle releases of muscles beneath taut skin but before long he's relaxed again, lying limp and comfortable against the pillows he is sitting on.
When he fucks him again the next morning, Pi doesn't complain that he's too rough, too forceful, that he isn't being loving enough and Jin is happy that Yamapi has changed his ways and they skip work, careless of the consequences of doing so, to sit in bed and watch tv, to just be together and enjoy the companiable silence between them as Jin lets Yamapi slump heavily onto his shoulder, caressing a cold cheek and idling reminding himself to turn the heating up when they got up.

And yes, in case you are wondering, I did just kill Yamapi and have Jin still doing what he will with him. All inspired by a music vid I was shown once where a guy killed his gf and kept living with her as though she was alive and have had that bunny floating around ever since and what better way to use it than lovely non fluffy Pin XD
7th-Dec-2008 12:48 pm (UTC)
when it said DarkFic I was like 'D: Doesn't sound great..', I imagined something else but SADHJsdafkdhajfsd.hsdakgasdjh
totally not what I expected and WOW.
good JOB. WOW.
pretty much greatest Pin evar. xD;
9th-Dec-2008 12:48 am (UTC)
LOL!!!!! I absolutely hate putting proper warnings on my fics tbh, because the necrophilia part is meant to be a surprise, but I knew if I didn't say something people would complain so...

But wow right back at ya!!!! That is a compliment and a HALF!!!!! You've totally made my day with that! <3
8th-Dec-2008 04:56 am (UTC)
Again...major short-circuit!!!

u really gave dark PiN!!!
n somehow i really can stomach it...
(i can't help coz i really like fic like this)

u my dear r the best!
love you for this! ^^
9th-Dec-2008 12:49 am (UTC)
Wow! It seems there are more Pin fans that aren't all for the fluffy idyllic fics than I thought ^_^

and thank you!! That is so very flattering *blushes* and of course thank you as well for commenting <3
10th-Dec-2008 12:31 am (UTC)
I don't know bout all the other PiN fan out there,
but my taste has always been something dark (or mostly ceazy n weird)
m a whore for angsty fic...n not just a normal angsty fic where it only involve heart-breaking...i need blood, death or even sumthing physically hurtful...or mental-breaking process..(n of coz i love porn as well ^^)...

but m not really a Pin fan u noe...m a uke!pi stalk fan...
m a stalker since i only comment the fic that kinda blew my mind like urs ^^
(n if it seme pi or sumthin m not sure i want to comment, i won't read xDD)...

n nooooo....i should be the one to thank you..lol
i've been searching for this kind of fic for a very long time...xDD
8th-Dec-2008 09:13 am (UTC)

That video was seriously disturbing (OMG the heating bit at the end of yours... there was this line that was something like 'that's why i had to buy a heater for your thighs' *shudders unpleasantly*) but this is just AMAZING! I love how it goes from annoyance to sex, and you just think Jin's going to be a bit rough, then THAT happens <3333 And then Jin's so sweet and adorable afterwards, taking care of Pi and spending time with him, and I LOVE how you write it so that WE know Pi's dead but it's like Jin doesn't.. Amazing. Spectacular. Perfect. I can't think of enough good words to describe this.

(I LOVE THE COMMENTS YOU GOT XD 'greatest pin ever' SO TRUE!)
9th-Dec-2008 12:58 am (UTC)
You big masochist you :P

LOL how cool is that!! I couldn't for the life of me tell you what the lyrics were so ceck out the synergy there XD

and you are always TOO nice about my stuff BUT I am very pleased to have done the job of getting it all nasy and squick but not so blatant XDDDD

So NOT true I'm sure!! Not least cuz not a single bnf graced it with their presene :P But they are amazing to hear 0_____0

9th-Dec-2008 09:37 am (UTC)
Don't you know it XDD (I love how saying 'I'm S' or 'I'm M' is so normal in Japan XDD)

Lmao, clearly they wormed their way into your subconscious XD

I'm NEVER too nice, I'm not quite nice enough ♥ When I'm feeling brave enough to face the mass of html that is my fic-rec post (because the rich text bit always freaks out my browser), I shall be adding these two in - not that anyone ever READS any of my recs, lmao.

IT IS TOO TRUE. This is going to turn into a five-year-old argument if we're not careful XD And the bnfs, like I was saying before, don't DO squick. Which sucks, that none of them seem to branch out..
11th-Dec-2008 04:03 am (UTC)
LOL It just reminds me of porn tbh!! Just cuz in one of them they have this S/M convo before kicking off.

Yeah that must be it :P

Yeah I discovered that switching between the 2 screws up my coding too :S Especially now that I have a fic directory I never update for just that reason >_< I'm sure they do!! It's just one of those things you don't look at unless you;re stuck for something to read :S

It makes me laugh everytime that Crys always harps on about being soo unique and tries everything but really its all just porn :P I will just have to do more of it to compensate *heropose*
11th-Dec-2008 08:53 am (UTC)
LOL YES me too XDD hahaha 'kicking off' what a politically correct way to put it!

Ahh I know what you mean X_x You've not tried everything until you're not writing fluffy-crack-porn. HAHAHA DO IT!! *waves pompoms* ACK *chokes on the dust*
11th-Dec-2008 09:00 am (UTC)
Dang and I'm NEVER polictically correct usually too :P

Also POKE msn POKE cuz I can be around on it for up to an hour since I finish early today if you can make it on ^_^
11th-Dec-2008 09:01 am (UTC)
SERTDY^JHW$%Q% *runs*
8th-Dec-2008 10:50 am (UTC)
my GOD !!!!!


SEE..i'm drooling..you seriously good.
9th-Dec-2008 12:50 am (UTC)
LOL try not to get any drool in your keyboard there :P

But thank you, drool inducing fic is always a great compliment XD
9th-Dec-2008 02:36 am (UTC)
you desereve all the best compliment..I'm your fan..
and it's JIN..I love JIN..

man~drroling again..
can anybody smack me from thinking of that super duper SEXY JINJIN?
9th-Dec-2008 02:54 am (UTC)
Awwww thats very sweet ^_^

LOL I dont think I write him that often tbh... but feel free to join/watch this comm if you like what I write (even though half of it is SuJu, though with your icon thats probably not a problem yes? ^^) in january at least I will be posting a huge one that was my entry for je_holiday XD
9th-Dec-2008 06:22 am (UTC)

you know how to tied me up to all your fics ne..?
like I said..if you write suju..can you post it at suju_saikou..
lol..I tell you twice already..sorry...

and..MY GOD !!

KIBUM icon that you used..*died*
8th-Dec-2008 03:55 pm (UTC)
9th-Dec-2008 12:46 am (UTC)
Yup, and then have Jin fuck his lifeless corpse too, much fun XD
9th-Dec-2008 03:36 am (UTC)
9th-Dec-2008 04:00 am (UTC)
HAHAHAHA ♥ Don't you think it's fitting though, that Pi the man of so little expression is the one that is lifeless? :P
9th-Dec-2008 04:03 am (UTC)
hahaha, yeaaaaaaaaah. =D♥
1st-Feb-2009 01:16 pm (UTC)
another recommended fic by myxstorie XD
oh wow. dark. really dark @_@
2nd-Feb-2009 02:58 am (UTC)
I love these dark ones so much XD Clearly I am a very vicious individual :P
20th-May-2009 08:24 pm (UTC)
didn't realize it until the end that pi's dead..lolz. so i had to go back and re-read it carefully.

And poor jin - seems like he didn't realize that pi's dead?

My first Pin darkfic, i'm not even sure whther there are anyother fics around, but suprisingly, i liked it^^

thnx for sharing.
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